英语好的进 紧急求助 ！！３Ｑ３Ｑ
20分实在少了!
One day, when I was hanging about with my friends in the street, a sudden blow taking dust came into our eyes so that we had to closed them. After opening the eys, we were in an strange place. There were many people and all of them are youngster. They seemed excited with posters in their hands. I watched them carefully and found out the person on it is my favourite singer Jay. We were shocked because we were staying at the live "Excellent Singing Performance".
Suddenly, Jay appeared after the lights were lighted. We ran forward regardless of the surprise. Jay sang many songs which are all my favourite. I was so happy with with my friends that I were nearly crazy. We were singing and dancing there, and our feelings were excellent.
Another blow took us into a whirlpool, and I was so afraid that I began to cry. But after opening my eyes, my feeling became calm because I found it is only a dream.
I still like that feeling even if I can go to Jay's singing performance in the dream, so I will never forget it. This is the thing that will be deeply kept in my mind, and I hope it may become true some day in the future.
嘘...别忘了给我加分啊!嘿嘿!
if u put 30 points, i would do it for ya
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