有谁可以帮我纠正下我的简历,第一次写
咳。。。。国外打工没有必要这么写。越简单越好，太复杂了对方一看就知道是个新手。老手不可能这么浪费时间。而且他们重视资历，而不是写得好不好要不要钱之类的。
这些是要改的：-
Objective:-
PT job in coffee shop
English skills:-
IELTS 5.5, good communicate skills(不知道你口语怎么样哈）
Free time:-
Weekdays after 3pm
The whole weekend
Introduction:-
I am a Chinese student that just come to UK. I want to practise my oral English and learn a new skill. Coffee shop could provide me interesting knowledge and I really like the warm feeling of it.
I'd like talk to different people and make friends. Working too hard is my short-come as my English will only in the education aspect. So it's really appreciated if you could let me do this job. I'll try my best.
Thanks.
这些是建议改的地方。还有，中国人申请会比较麻烦。因为老外不是很喜欢中国人的个性。虽然勤恳又好学，但是在他们眼里是保守而且不懂享受乐趣，并且很少听得懂他们的笑话。老外怕麻烦，所以沟通如果不行的话。。。。。争取发挥出你的幽默感和勤快的优点。。请加油了！！！
操。你是中国人吗？
有种的不要问我啊
