帮我看看翻译，并修正一下，谢谢！！！
不错，写得很好，就是中间有些不具体。
welcom -- welcome
ship -- 用cruise
I will do my best to give you the best service. 較好
for the safety on board,
kildly -- kindly
passengers please strictly observe the safety regulations
don't smoke
cabin
we are happy/glad to listen to any of your suggestions
anchoring along the port
be safe -- be careful
Ladies and Gentlemen,
Welcome to take the ship of (), I am your captain here; I will try my best to give you my best service.
For the safety reason of this journey, passengers please kindly stick to observe the sailing safety management rules and pay attention to the passenger notices. Please do not smoke in the passengers cabin, and keep the cabin clean all the time. The smoking room is located in the rear of the passenger cabin. We welcome and value your comments and suggestions to improve our service. /Ladies and Gentlemen, the ship is mooring to its berth soon, please take all your belongings and disembark one by one carefully. We wish you a good journey!
