帮我描写一个人,急急急

王朝干货·作者佚名  2011-12-10  
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他今年40多岁了,中等身材。他有花白的头发,眼角上有皱纹,并且鼻子很大,但眼睛很有神。他稍微有点胖,有一个双层下巴。

他爱好很广泛,经常下象棋,慢跑,唱卡拉OK,每天都要遛狗,有时也滑滑板,练跆拳道。他喜欢冒险,一有时间就去远足,漂流,甚至是蹦极。

他很开朗,而且有活力。他非常慷慨,直率,而且乐观。

he's 40 some years old in mid height. his hair's all white and winkles already can been seen around his eyes. he has a large nose. 但眼睛很有神( but at here, i donno how to translate, maybe his eyes r always shine)he's a little overweight.有一个双层下巴

he loves all kinds of activities, playing chess, running, singing karioke. everyday, he takes his dog for a walk, somtimes he skateboarding for a while( just to let you know, skateboarding in US is a very dangeous sport, i have no idea a 40-yr old can do it. if u writting this to a english person, you better not write this, otherwise they will think that person's crazy, i 'm serious), practising tae kwon do. he loves advanture, often he will take a long trip in the wild, do some drifting in the river, even bengee jump( here, bengee jump's not even related to outdoor advanture, the sentence doesn't work itself. u have to work on it.)

he is optimistic, and energetic。he is also very generous and striaght forward type of person. ( 乐观和开朗几乎一个意思,重复,)总觉得你是在应付,作为英语来说重复太多了,而且很多不符合国外的写作习惯。我翻译的不是很好,你给的太局限了,中间应该要有很多的连接词,无法加,鼻子很大,怎么就变成‘但眼睛有神了’?难道鼻子大眼睛就不有神了?你可以把眼睛的描写放到前面一点。而且我不知道你这个是什么样的作文formal or informal,用词上有不同的

He's about 40 years old, has a pair of sharp eyes, medium stature, has silver hair and some wrinkles above his eyes and a big nose. He is a bit fat, and has a double chin.

He's rejoice, vigorous, very kind, outspoken and optimistic.

He has a lot of habbits. Always play chase, running, and hang out with his friends while he has free time. He walk his dog every day. And play with his skateboard sometimes. He love adventures. Everytime when he has time, he'll go camping, drifting, or even high-jumps.

虽然翻译的不是很好,

但是希望能帮到你

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