His (succees ) makes his family happy.They hope that he will (succees) again. s

His (succees ) makes his family happy.They hope that he will (succees) again.

这样说对吗?

His (success) makes his family happy.They hope that he will (succeed) again.

第二句话缺动词,应用SUCCEED.还有,SUCCESS好像拼错了.对

His (success ) makes his family happy.They hope that he will (succeed) again.

will 后面应该用动词原型；所以是suceed;第一个success拼写有误。

正确答案见上面。