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Demand for Paper and Paper Products in Beauty City

This is bar graph of demand for paper and paper products in Beauty city from 1982 to 1997.

As we can seen from the graph ,it is growth rate war up to 300% in grovenment, 400% in industry , 800% in newspaper. Especially 1000% in educational institutions in the last 15 years .

I think there are several reasons would explain the phenonenom . Firstly, we should appreciated our government,beacuse it made a lot of policies for education. Opportunities for people to receive education are becoming more avaible . This stimulate paper's need, duing to school need text books, task papers and reference books. Secondly , more and more people attach important to news and national evens, so it is need paper to public vairous kind of report.Finally, government have a strong demand for paper since a large number of offical documents need to be printed.

Based on what has been mentioned above,we think that demand for paper and paper products in Beauty city will continue for a long time .

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This is bar (chart?)graph of demand for paper and paper products in Beauty city from 1982 to 1997.

As we can seen from the (Chart?)graph ,in the last 15 years, the (demand?)growth rate (of paper usage)was up 300% in grovenment, 400% in industry , 800% in newspaper, especially, 1000% in educational institutions.

I think there are several reasons would explain the phenonenom . Firstly, we should appreciated our government made a lot of policies for promote education. Opportunities for people to receive higher education are becoming more avaible. This stimulates demand for paper products, due to school needs for text books, task papers and reference books. Secondly , more and more people attach important to news and national events. It is neccessary to use paper to print out vairous kind of report regularly. (With the economy booming, there are a lot more advertisement material to be printed. Futher more, with the help of computer usage, more printer paper are consumed). Finally, government have a strong demand for paper since a large number of offical documents need to be printed.

(why put some package box usage in there, maybe the production in that beauty city is booming, more things being exported?)

Based on what has been mentioned above, we think that demand for paper and paper products in Beauty city will continue for a long time .

Demand for Paper and Paper Products in Beauty City

This is a bar graph of demand for paper and paper products in Beauty city from 1982 to 1997.

As we can seen from the graph , the growth rate of paper consumption went up to 300% in grovenment, 400% in industry , 800% in newspaper. Especially 1000% in educational institutions in the last 15 years .

There are several factors would contribute to the increasing demands. Firstly, we should appreciate our government for its effort to employ a lot of policies to benifit education. Opportunities for people to receive education are becoming more available. This stimulates paper's need, owing to textbooks, task papers and reference books which are necessory school supply. Secondly , more and more people pay more attention to important news and national events, as a result, surging demand for all categories of newspaper and media.Finally, government has a strong demand for paper since a large number of offical documents need to be printed.

Based on what have been mentioned above,The conclusion could be drawed that demand for paper and paper products in Beauty city will continue for a long time.